Mar 7, 2013

A man is beautiful



It's perhaps a minor issue, so give it perhaps a minor thought. What's wrong with this poem:

A man is beautiful
but
you have to swing
and swing and swing
and swing like
a handkerchief in the
wind

Well, consider this one:

A woman is beautiful
but
you have to swing
and swing and swing
and swing like
a handkerchief in the
wind

That better, right? Well, it's also from Jack Kerouac, the last one. But that's not the only thing. Let's think about this some more.

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